This paper is about a famous Japanese designer Ikko Tanaka. His design work is really something special. The way he uses different parts of Japanese culture to create the designs he wants. How each one has their style and is speaking their own message. the one I choose really draw my eye and it really reminded me of the work done by Bauhaus.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fd6Wf4XLbJoeOVZo6ZIh9ZRNRSoXOS4vFGjKV5EVjak/
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Very well written from the point-of-view of our readings. Good examples show exactly how Tanaka’s work reflects Bauhaus principles. Excellent.
These are a few comments to think about in your writing:
Using paragraphs to divide sections will make your writing more clear. “For example, simple person. Another theory used b”. Another theory is another though and should be a new paragraph.
For your next writing, use quotes to back up your statements. For example, “One of the theories Bauhaus used was the idea of simplicity”. Is there a quote that you can use to substantiate this?