Summary revision

Based on the feedback I got from my classmates and prof. Blain, I think I shouldn’t have used the word “I” in the beginning of my summary because the summary isn’t based on opinions. I’m glad some of my classmates peer reviewed my work because that is a great way to let others know how they did.  

1 Comment

  1. Jacquelyn Blain

    That’s really all I found. You did get some good comments. I think people really liked it, partly because it was so well written.

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