I received feedback from the professor also one of the colleagues found part of my summary interesting. According to the professor, I need to clean up a “couple of odd sentences.” It’s just some minor stuff like removing a type and changing one capital letter to lowercase. Plus, rephrase a sentence so it doesn’t sound odd.
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You generally did a nice job. One trick for helping with those “odd” sentences is to read things out loud to someone else, and see if it makes sense to them. If not, just tell them in your own words what you meant, and THAT will usually be a better sentence than the original.