Class notes for 10/1

Vocabulary to know:

  • Cursory – not paying much attention/to be fast.
  • Superficial – occurring on the surface.
  • Perfunctory – in a fast paced/rush.
  • Haphazard – lack of order or planning.
  • Attribution – to give credit.
  • Contextualized – to put an action in a context, one that is appropriate, for purposes of study.
  • Thesis – the main point/ main argument.
  • Annotate – provide more information, to take notes.

The internet:

  • archive
  • searchable
  • linked/network
  • aggregated

What are we struggling about? / Questions for Assignment

  • How to cc others
  • structure / formatting/ organization (differ)
  • Content / formality / tone

Our strong points in Assignment #2:

  • Transitions / flow
  • Connect experience to bigger issues
  • Intro to paragraph hook/praise
  • addressed assignment expectations
  • incorporating pre-draft (blog)
  • main points
  • clear sentences
  • professional tone
  • incorporate research
  • prove substantial
  • connect experience

Our weak points in Assignment #2:

  • Audience
  • Bad structure
  • Style/sentence- level
  • repetition
  • tense/voice(active) – formatting
  • grammar
  • make clear statements
  • structure – transitions – repetitive
  • forgetting smaller details
  • personal (?)

Memo Format:

  • To ……
  • Purpose
  • Summary
  • Discussion
  • Recommendation

Things our school needs:

  • More money/tuition
  • More students/ enrollment
  • Retention rate
  • Graduation rate
  • Certification
  • Employment

IMPORTANT:

  1. Be sure to categorize everything we post on open lab.
  2. Read Strategies for Summarizing.