This is a picture that I did not take of a young girl walking here small white dog. The dog spots a larger dog about 100 feet away and start running to it. This dog was two time the size of the young women’s dog. The women yell at the dog telling him to stop but he keeps running and barking. Then the bigger dog lets out a bark so loud, so strong that the smaller dog stops in his tracks and start running to the women in pure fright.
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Good. Can you add more sensory detail, especially surrounding the moment when the smaller dog stopped in its tracks?