Erik Yan
5-6-19
Eng 1121
Professor Hall
I think for unit 4 I am considering revising my paper about women in video games. I plan on changing the audience who are going to read it. I kind of want women who don’t play video games to read it. I might also change some of the evidence I used in that paper. I’m not sure what else I can do to revise the paper about women in video games. I’m not exactly sure what genre I want to change it to. I’m maybe considering changing it to a comic but the thing is, I’m not sure how I’ll be able to convey my message and evidence for the reader. Maybe I might also consider a letter to a video game company to convince them to change how women are portrayed.
