Link to the editorial: http://www.menshealth.com/guy-wisdom/you-might-be-sex-offender-and-not-know-it
This editorial talks about the silly ways you could land yourself a permanent spot in the sex offender’s list. And for my drawings I tried to maintain the silly aspect of such a serious situation.
Hector-
You have an interesting article to work from. These sketches are more like scenes from the article or scenarios which could cause the person to be a registered offender… but the aren’t SAYING anything about it. The silliness of the whole thing you wanted to show is not reading clearly. Go back to your concept… what visual metaphors could you use to get it across. Is there a way to alter your chosen sketch of the man peeing to make your idea clear.
Remember this is NOT about drawing a scene, this is about drawing an idea.