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- samurai edit 1
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- samurai edit 2
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- samurai edit 3
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- factory edit 1
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- factory edit 2
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- factory edit 3
COMD 2313 Illustration 1, SP2017
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Brandy GREAT job on these ideas on on your edits! So much potential here!
I like Factory 2 and factory 3 as having the best Point of View. I also like Samurai 1.
In factory 2 I’d force the perspective more, same with 3. I can absolutely help you with that.
In Samurai 1 I’d get the dolphin to twist so it is about to face its opponent.
I think my FAVE are the kitty factory ideas… but you should choose your favorite to go with. Let me know and I’ll suggest edits and give you value feedback.
nice work!
Thank you for the feedback, I’ll go forward with factory 2.
OK! I think thats a good idea. Factory 2 has some great potential. Here what I’d like to see you do is IMAGINE you are standing right at the edge of that conveyer belt looking at the machine. What happens to the perspective? Try this: Set up a model. Use boxes and stuffed animals and a piece of fabric to represent the conveyer belt… maybe some objects for the machine parts if you have them… but not necessary. – Now actually take pictures from different angles to compose and get the perspective right. It will be so helpful!