To start off saying, this route would be mostly focused on beauty. For the people who wants to explore and find the unexpecting secrets in Brooklyn. This route displays a walkable journey in Brookyln that differs from your everyday walks for you to explore something new & love what you see. So, what I’m about to share with you now should be suggested to everyone that have the craving to find beauty in whatever weather from wherever you start.
Imagine being on the Brooklyn Bridge and wondered what does it look like from a distance that you can see all of it. The beauty of that massive structure[Brooklyn Bridge] will blow you away from just staring at it during the night or in the morning, when the sun sets or rises. But I would recommend viewing it when it starts getting dark. You would say that you wouldn’t be able to see it in the dark. Well, of course you can. The light that flicker on top of it’s head and as the cars lights flashing on it’s body. You’ll be able to see it. Even with the lights from the buildings on both sides of the bridge will capture your eyes. As you stare in that perspective, you will think its flat and smaller from the distance your at. And you may ask where is the perfect spot to see the bridge at such a full view. That would be on the Manhattan Bridge. Its the best spot to see everything at the perfect height and distance. It’s not far from the Brooklyn Bridge at all. So, the route I chose to get to Manhattan Bridge won’t be a hassle, but seeing something new that i’ve enjoyed, you will enjoy as well.
I chose to go on a rainy day. Thats not the right weather to do such a walk for 15-20 minutes including stopping to see many things, but I’m that type of person that would go anywhere without caring if the weather is gloomy or not. Others should be that way as well to get to their destination. Anyway, it was starting to become dark which wasn’t that bad. Mostly your going to surrounded by Asian Culture, so, your going to be in ChinaTown. You want to see the amazing historical looking asian designs that they display outside of their buildings. Also, get to smell and see a lot of different variety of food you want to try or familiar to you. There’s so many markets that sell interesting fruits, bakeries with tasting looking treats and bread, cold or warm beverages from that I know that people would say, “I’m too exhausted to do all of that walking”, “I don’t have the time”, or “I’m too hungry and lazy”, and etc of so many excuses. I understand completely to those feelings because I can be like that as well. We’re all human, but it wouldn’t kill us to just take some time to walk somewhere and be sucked into it.
When you finally follow that narrow but bright path on the Manhattan Bridge, you will see graffiti on the ground and on other buildings. Different colors of graffiti everywhere as you walk and the view of the Freedom Tower in the distance. The lights of the cities that never sleep and the ant-sized looking, busy people that you can see strolling along. All you’ll hear is the roaring trains rushing pass. Might hear the honking of the cars but not as much. Then you’ll see the Brookyln bridge in your sites. Stop and stare at it. During the night time, you can’t really see the details of the bridge but the ontline of it with the gray sky as its background which makes it stand out more. As your staring, your going to think that it looks like it’s a painting, not real, with the water underneath it that looks so still and flat. Then having the dark sky and smoky clouds behind it makes the bridge stand out more. The one word you would gasp to some up what you see is, “wow”. Thats just a guess of what you might say, but I know you’ll be amazed. Having to see something that looks unreal makes the trip worth it. I think that walking later in the day and the change of weather made the sight better than going during the day. The Brooklyn bridge amazes the people that live within the city and outside of the city. People come all over to see the bridge and want to see the uniqueness and importance it portrays. Even according to the News report on NY1 at 7/07/2013, a large group of swimmers swam under the Brooklyn Bridge and had some positive comments about the experience. One swimmers says,”You look up and you see that you’re swimming user this beautiful bridge and it feels great. It’s a view that most New Yorkers don’t get a chance to see.” This quote proves that we have to try to look at this bridge in any angle as if we had to.
Therefore just think about beauty for a second and wonder if you can find it anywhere but at a different time or weather. I would force you to take this route but to become interested into it or think about it. Won’t it be interesting? Won’t it be fun? I think it was and I know you’ll think so too.
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I think you did good on describing what you saw and what it looks like when its raining compared to a normal day without rain. I think there is a big difference on the time of they day it took place. I would probably consider taking this walk but now on a rainy day because I wouldn’t enjoy as much but I would like to see a good view of the skyscraper and the brooklyn bridge in just one big view in real life. I can sort of picture what your trying to describe but maybe you can tell us a little more on what side you where standing on and what way you were facing.
I think you can explain a little more of what was beauty to you from the route you took. Im not exactly sure if you beauty was on how the bridge it self looked like on the day of your walk or the beauty of the lights it has when its dark. I like how you started off on your first paragraph. I think you should say a little more of what you taught was beauty to you and your route and how you want others to realize that same beauty you experienced. I think i would consider on talking this walk because I always wanted to walk on the manhattan bridge but actually never took the time to do so. But hopefully one day I will and experience it when its daytime and see if i can see a difference. I think you did good on describing what you saw and what it looks like when its raining compared to a normal day without rain. I think there is a big difference to on the time of they day it took place. I would probably consider taking this walk but now on a rainy day because I wouldn’t enjoy as much but I would like to see a good view of the skyscraper and the brooklyn bridge in just one big view in real life. But other wise everything seems pretty good. Hopefully this helped a little.