Movies that people love are often silly
Comedies that take place in a tropical island like Jumanji
Where they have to fight animals while making Jokes
A perfect balance
But for people like me money runs out kind of fast
You sometimes have to eat small portions like a mouse
Sometimes if you save enough you get to go to your favorite chicken spot
Who doesn’t like that
Or you can go to a place you never been before
and eat something you never had whole watching the star
OMG, Isaiah, a favorite chicken spot: who *doesn’t* like that!!
: – )))))))
at “But for me” the whole narrative turned inward and sent me on a journey.
The Jumanji reference was so On.
The double “sometimes” WORKS
and the rhythm at the end is stellar.
(So far, I have been commenting on OpenLab with emojis. Alas, I don’t think that they are working. I am gonna stop and we will discuss this further in class.) My question to you is: what poets (music lyrics count) do you read or like? I ask, because I hear you listening here.
Nice work.