What has caused you difficulty? What I am struggling the most with is narrowing down what I want to discuss in my essay. There is so much information and I want to write about every aspect of obesity in America. Why America is top ranked of obesity? How to overcome obesity in America? Battling with obesity in America compared to other countries. I know that it is best to pick one topic and branch out of it but not too much. So I’m working on trying to stick to my main topic “Why America is top rank of obesity?” in picking to 2 topics that still stick to the main topic.
Was it a worthwhile challenge? Absolutely. I have been learning so much from the sources I picked to complete my essay. Some of the linked I initially picked have hyperlinks with additional information and off topic information. I’m looking forward to completing this assignment and sharing all of the information I found.
How did you overcome/get around that sticking point? I have yet to come around my sticking point. I will be making my essay’s main point the initial topic using the sources I found but I’m still debating if I want to add some information on “How to overcome obesity in America?” & “Over Coming Obesity – Youth” as I came across great informative sources (hyperlinks).
How could you avoid that trouble in future assignments? I will try my very best NOT to select the hyperlinks. I think doing so expanded my curiosity to learn more on this topic but I didn’t realize it would also throw me off my main topic. Opening up additional issues to obesity and the prevention of obesity.
I have faith that my essay will all come together & flow nicely!
