Find your name on the list of partners below. Before Monday’s class, you must read that person’s rough draft of their essay, and post a comment on their post with your feedback. You should read their essay at least twice, and write at least 300 words of feedback.
Instead of correcting their grammar or punctuation or usage errors, which we’ll all have on rough drafts, try to think with them about the essay they are trying to write, and give suggestions about how to arrive at that clear and effective final draft. Items to consider: Paragraphing (too long/short/off-topic), Organization (think of my outline model), Thesis, P-I-E argumentation, Tone/Register (appropriate/effect?), and any other comments you might have.
Partners:
Kenyan Allen & Zinaida Zolotnik
Pedro Almanzar & Rosena Wallace
Marisol Valencia & Nicholas Contrada
Brandon Estevez & Jalin Slater
Jonathan Romero & Karen Hermita
Ivan Rodriguez & David Lam
Sara Reyes & Shary Lewis
Eric Reed & Asset Mballo
Robin Perez & Analissa Netram
Luis Peguero & Kaeun O
Jason Palma & Jonathan Pallares
