Jennifer Zheng
Essay 3 draft
English 1121
5/17/2020
Thereâs A Destination for Everyone
In Tony Parsonsâ short story âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â the central characters are Jaswinder Smith also known as Jazz, Megan, Donald Harrison, and lastly the man in black. In this short story, Parsons explores one of Jazzâs daily life at work as an immigration officer of the UK Border Agency. Securing the airport with other fellow agents. She examines travelers’ passports and detects fake reasoning in the Arrival hall queues, holding those whose stories do not match in a small corral where she at the end of her shift, goes and interacts and investigates farther. The story displays a connection between Jazz and those she interacts with, exploring all types of ethics as they landed on her border.Â
 In Zhang Longxiâs article, “The Pale Cast of Thought: On the Dilemma of Thinking and Action,” he explores the idea of the âInterpretationâ between mental activities and physical actions. On the other hand, another article from Denise K. Lajimodiereâs âOgimah Ikwe: Native Women and Their Path to Leadershipâ talks about the increased visibility of Native American women in leadership roles. While these articles are not focused on Parsonsâs story âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â they help me understand the ethics of Jazz, forming my thesis which is to show that âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â highlights how Jazzâs characteristics are connected to virtue, feminist, deontology, and global ethics. In order to prove this, I will first discuss Jazzâs job and her first meeting with the travelers who triggered her alarm. Second, I will be discussing the stereotypes in the airport fiction where she goes looking for the passport-muncher and when she goes and interacts with travelers in the holding room. Lastly, I will be exploring the scene where Jazz informs Donald what was going on as she helps him get home/ depart him.Â
An immigration officer of the UK Border Agency job is basically to evaluate travelers and notify them if they are skeptical, forbidding them to enter the United Kingdom. Although that is what Jazz does, she thinks otherwise, she likes to refer to her job as not to refuse entry to the UK but to have/ hear the inner alarm bell (Parsons,46). This emphasizes how she views herself; someone that is not stern and has a different/lighter perspective of what her job is about. With that being said, Jazzâs character is full of virtue and deontology ethics, as an officer, there are certain behaviors she does that makes the reader get a better understanding of her virtuous human being like her moral wisdom. A central scene that really provides an insight into the way that Jazz identifies passengers repeatedly reasoning is when she indicated Donald, Megan, and man in black to take a seat in a small corral. After hearing their response of visiting, Jazz made a decision due to her inner alarm signaling that they are not permitted to enter the United Kingdom. The most important thing to notice is that Jazz hates to be deceived by others more than anything. Knowing that they are being dishonset here saying Barack Obama planted a microchip in its brain, forged passport, and lastly visiting the wax museum to see candles and eat the world-famous British pizza. She still does her job accordingly, showing little to no personal feeling. As an immigration officer, she held back from saying anything offensive and was able to control her temper which carries her through the end of the story.
Toward the middle of the short story, it not only shows Jazz’s feminist ethic but a presence of deontology ethic as well. With the fugitive passport-muncher on the loose. While she went scouring for him, she said something along the line, âSooner or later, you bang your head up against my borderâ (Parsons, 54). This features a logic from Lajimodiere’s article, where she notes that âwomen’s power and status were based on their relative control over landâ (A history of nature). Jazz knows the airport from the bottom of her heart, compared to the passport-muncher, it’s her land, showing her power. By the time the passport-muncher was corner, she gave him a warning, “Don’t make me take you down” (Parsons, 54). He noticed it was only her and thought little of her since he was a foot taller and twice her weight, also the fact that she was a woman (Parsons, 54). But Jazz easily took him down, she was independent and made a process in mind. By the time she enters the small corral, she shows the authority she has as an officer to Megan telling her about the rights she has in order to get her to cooperate. When Megan started to open up and asked her a question about love, Jazz shows her feminist side and shared a bit of advice.Â
Toward the end where Jazz sees Donald heading towards the Arrivals hall, she notices something strange about him, in the passage, it stated, âHe looked at her mildly, slightly bewildered, as if they had never metâ (Parsons, 53). In Zhang Longxiâs article, Aristotle explains, âhumans as rational beings would think before they act and would interpret the present to anticipate the futureâ (Longxi,282). When Jazz finally sits down with him, she slowly and patiently explains to him that he has been reported missing, and his family is worried about him and she is going to send him home. This part emphasizes global ethics. According to Kimberly Hutchingâs global ethics, âSuch behaviors are connected to these major focal points: access to global markets, climate change, and a broad set of human rights related to health, education⌠and equality for allâ (Hutching). Jazz sees that Donald doesnât remember and looks confused, she shows him the boarding card and ensures him once again. When he asked what happened to him, she was on the verge of telling him the truth but she didnât because âshe knew that wasnât really what he was asking about…â(60). And just smiled.
Like what Tony Parsons once said, “Airports are places of extreme emotion where people come and go and experiences begin and end.” He revives “Say Hello, Wave Goodbye” after roaming the terminals for weeks, he creates characters like Jazz who guide wandering travelers to their destination.
Raysi
Does the student state the story title and author in the first paragraph? Yes/No
Yes
What characters does the student examine?
Jazz, Megan, Donald Harrison, and the man in black
What scene(s) does the student examine?
âParsons explores one of Jazzâs daily life at work as an immigration officer of the UK Border Agency. Securing the airport with other fellow agents. She examines travelersâ passports and detects fake reasoning in the Arrival hall queues, holding those whose stories do not match in a small corral where she at the end of her shift, goes and interacts and investigates farther.â
What type of ethics does the writer examine?
virtue, feminist, deontology, and global ethics
What is the writerâs thesis and method?
â While these articles are not focused on Parsonsâs story âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â they help me understand the ethics of Jazz, forming my thesis which is to show that âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â highlights how Jazzâs characteristics are connected to virtue, feminist, deontology, and global ethics. In order to prove this, I will first discuss Jazzâs job and her first meeting with the travelers who triggered her alarm. Second, I will be discussing the stereotypes in the airport fiction where she goes looking for the passport-muncher and when she goes and interacts with travelers in the holding room. Lastly, I will be exploring the scene where Jazz informs Donald what was going on as she helps him get home/ depart him.â
How many peer reviewed articles/chapters does the writer use?
2 peer-reviewed articles
Does the writer quote from the peer reviewed articles/chapters?
This features a logic from Lajimodiereâs article, where she notes that âwomenâs power and status were based on their relative control over landâ
In Zhang Longxiâs article, Aristotle explains, âhumans as rational beings would think before they act and would interpret the present to anticipate the futureâ (Longxi,282).
According to Kimberly Hutchingâs global ethics, âSuch behaviors are connected to these major focal points: access to global markets, climate change, and a broad set of human rights related to health, education⌠and equality for allâ (Hutching).
Are the peer reviewed articles/chapters part of the writerâs thesis?
yes
Cut and paste two of the most confusing sentences and explain why they are confusing.
I didnât find anything confusing while reading your essay.
I really enjoyed reading your essay. Good luck with your Final Draft!
1. Does the student state the story title and author in the first paragraph? Yes/No
Yes
2. Which characters does the student examine?
Donald Harrison, Jazz, Megan, and the Iraqi national.
3. What scene(s) does the student examine?
Jennifer examines the scene where Jazz takes Donald, Megan, and the man in black to the Coral room where she brings them in for questioning. She also includes the scene where she takes down the the guy in the black attire which exhibits her feminist ethics.
4. What type of ethics does the writer examine?
Jennifer examines deontology, global, virtue and feminist ethics.
5. What is the writerâs thesis and method? (It is okay to paste it in)
Jennifer’s thesis is â While these articles are not focused on Parsonsâs story âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â they help me understand the ethics of Jazz, forming my thesis which is to show that âSay Hello, Wave Goodbye,â highlights how Jazzâs characteristics are connected to virtue, feminist, deontology, and global ethics. In order to prove this, I will first discuss Jazzâs job and her first meeting with the travelers who triggered her alarm. Second, I will be discussing the stereotypes in the airport fiction where she goes looking for the passport-muncher and when she goes and interacts with travelers in the holding room. Lastly, I will be exploring the scene where Jazz informs Donald what was going on as she helps him get home/ depart him.â
6. How many peer reviewed articles/chapters does the writer use?
Jennifer uses two peer reviewed articles in her essay.
7. Does the writer quote from the peer reviewed articles/chapters? Be specific.
Yes she does. Her essays says: According to Kimberly Hutchingâs global ethics, âSuch behaviors are connected to these major focal points: access to global markets, climate change, and a broad set of human rights related to health, education⌠and equality for allâ (Hutching). Jazz sees that Donald doesnât remember and looks confused, she shows him the boarding card and ensures him once again. When he asked what happened to him, she was on the verge of telling him the truth but she didnât because âshe knew that wasnât really what he was asking aboutâŚâ(60).
8. Are the peer reviewed articles/chapters part of the writerâs thesis?
Yes.
9. Cut and paste two of the most confusing sentences and explain why they are confusing.
I was able to understand your sentences. This was a very interesting take on “Say Hello Wave Goodbye”. Wish you the best!
-Zach