Brendan Gonzalez
Essay 2-3 Page Draft
Jaswinders jobs main focus is to inspect and assess peoples stories and documents on a professional level making sure both sides are legit without any bumps in the road. Jaswinder is great at what she does as a professional her work ethic is amazing. The most important thing to notice throughout Tony Parsons short story, Jaswinder didnât let anything get by her any passenger that had something relatively odd she notice and pulled to the side like the women with forged documents or the man who was smuggling drugs through the airport. The main part of the story that really shows Jaswinders eye and feel for something wrong with somebody when it comes to work is. Page( 46) when the man in black came up to her at the table and her inner alarm went off quickly telling her something was wrong with the passport , she put him to the side when she went to confirm with another worker she was correct but another problem came up again with the same man in the black T-shirt he ended up being a drug smuggler as well
Jaswinder goes against the typical stereotype of a female or the feminist ethic , âtraditional ethics views as trivialâ. Jazz is great at what she does and doesnât let anything get in her way or head for being in a male dominate job according to âPolitico.comâ enforcement jobs; today, women represent just 15 percentâ, throughout the story Jaswinder shows why she belongs at the job even though its a male dominated line of work but Jaswinder shows exactly why she should be there, on page 54 she was put to the test and put in a situation,â He was a foot taller and twice her weight, donât make me take you down. He laughed at that but when he tried to push past her she slipped one leg behind him and shoved his chest hard with the palms of her hand. He fell backwards and went down fast and heavyâ, Jazz was underestimated because sheâs a women going up against a man who thought he could over power her because he was bigger than she was but she didnât let that intimidate her Jazz displayed bravery.Â
Ethics chapter 12, section 3 problems with feminist ethics âProblems With This Theoryâ (qcc.Cuny.edu) Section 3. Problem five states âThe theory ultimately disempowers women. While women act based on caring non-females can act based on rights and duties or utility or some other basic principle and avoid dealing with women because theirs is not an ethic of rights or duties and thus they need not be afforded such.â Jaswinder doesnât base anything on caring but stays to the code of honor to the job protecting the people and the UK to the best she possibly can, even though Jazz showed the Megan sympathy and care towards the end on page 60 giving her advice about a man, âListen, Jazz said listen to me Megan it keeps it does if itâs real it doesnât just fade away overnight.â Jazz showed feelings some would say because sheâs a female others will say she was just being nice but regardless Jazz stood by what was right and her duties as an officer and Megan got sent back from where she came from. This could be a cause of why only 15 percent of enforcement officers are female because they think that females go by feelings and care and not duty.Â
Does the student state the story title and author in the first paragraph? Yes/No
NO
What characters does the student examine?
Jaswinders
What scene(s) does the student examine?
Jaswinder shows why she belongs at the job even though its a male dominated line of work but Jaswinder shows exactly why she should be there, on page 54
What type of ethics does the writer examine?
Feminist ethics
What is the writerâs thesis and method? (It is okay to paste it in)
ThesisďźJaswinder goes against the typical stereotype of a female or the feminist ethic , âtraditional ethics views as trivial
methodďźdid not mention
How many peer reviewed articles/chapters does the writer use?
2
Does the writer quote from the peer reviewed articles/chapters? Be specific.
YesďźEthics chapter 12, section 3 problems with feminist ethics âProblems With This Theoryâ (qcc.Cuny.edu) Section 3. Problem five states âThe theory ultimately disempowers women. While women act based on caring non-females can act based on rights and duties or utility or some other basic principle and avoid dealing with women because theirs is not an ethic of rights or duties and thus they need not be afforded such.â
Are the peer reviewed articles/chapters part of the writerâs thesis?
NO
Cut and paste two of the most confusing sentences and explain why they are confusing.
â throughout the story Jaswinder shows why she belongs at the job even though itsâ
who is sheďź
âJazz is great at what she does and doesnât let anything get in her way or head for being in a male dominate job according to âPolitico.comâ enforcement jobs;â
It is there an punctuation problem or my misunderstand.
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1. Does the student state the story title and author in the first paragraph? Yes/No
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– No, it wasnât mentioned correctly. Instead he wrote â The most important thing to notice throughout Tony Parsons short story…â
2. What characters does the student examine?
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– He examines Jaswinder.
3. What scene(s) does the student examine?
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– The scenes he decided to examine where âhe was a foot taller..â and â listen to me Megan ..â
4. What type of ethics does the writer examine?
– The ethics he decided to examine were feminist ethics.
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5. What is the writerâs thesis and method? (It is okay to paste it in)
– Iâm assuming his thesis was â Jaswinder goes against the typical stereotype of a female or the feminist ethic , âtraditional ethics views as trivial.â
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6. How many peer reviewed articles/chapters does the writer use?
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– He uses two, Politico.com and Problems With This Theory.
7. Does the writer quote from the peer reviewed articles/chapters? Be specific.
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– Yes he does. For example, âThe theory ultimately disempowers women. While women act based on caring non-females can act based on rights and duties or utility or some other basic principle and avoid dealing with women because theirs is not an ethic of rights or duties and thus they need not be afforded such.â
8. Are the peer reviewed articles/chapters part of the writerâs thesis?
– No, it was not.
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9. Cut and paste two of the most confusing sentences and explain why they are confusing.
– âJaswinder goes against the typical stereotype of a female or the feminist ethic , âtraditional ethics views as trivial.â This sentence was confusing, Iâm guessing this was your thesis? If so, you shouldâve been more thorough especially with your method. Be specific on what youâre examining.
– â This could be a cause of why only 15 percent of enforcement officers are female because they think that females go by feelings and care and not duty. â This was confusing because Iâm not sure if this was the end of your writing. It is only a draft so maybe you werenât finish but try elaborating more on what youâre trying to inform the reader.
Hope all works well for you, best of luck on your final paper.