Ariel – Hey bro are we chilling tonight?
friend – yeah, whats the word?
Ariel -I’m down for a movie night or something, who are we inviting?
Friend – is it a boys night or like a chill night?
Ariel- Im down for whatever
Friend – lets do a boys night haven’t chilled with the squad in a minute.
Ariel – okay ill come get you right now and well see who we pick up next.
Friend – bet see you in a bit.
( The boys didn’t come out that night, Ariel chilled with his friend and drove around Brooklyn.)
Adding the narrated bit at the end of the story really added more depth to it. If it wasn’t added I would have assumed you had gotten together with all your friends, but adding it made it so we know that something happened and they couldn’t come out so there was a change in plans