Prof. Jessica Penner | OL10 | Spring 2021

Ariel Itshaik, Dialogue 4

Ariel – Hey bro are we chilling tonight?

friend – yeah, whats the word?

Ariel -I’m down for a movie night or something, who are we inviting?

Friend – is it a boys night or like a chill night?

Ariel- Im down for whatever

Friend – lets do a boys night haven’t chilled with the squad in a minute.

Ariel – okay ill come get you right now and well see who we pick up next.

Friend – bet see you in a bit.

( The boys didn’t come out that night, Ariel chilled with his friend and drove around Brooklyn.)

1 Comment

  1. Eamon Bolger

    Adding the narrated bit at the end of the story really added more depth to it. If it wasn’t added I would have assumed you had gotten together with all your friends, but adding it made it so we know that something happened and they couldn’t come out so there was a change in plans

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