What I enjoyed about Jone’s writing piece is how he took us through a childhood memory with a little girl and her mom. I liked how he wrote his story to portray what a relationship with a mom and daughter may look like when it’s her first day of school. My question for the author is “what made you want to write a short story about a mother and a daughter?”. My second question is, “who or what mostly inspired your short stories?”. I don’t have any suggestions for the author, I think this short story was a good piece and gave me an outlook of how someone’s else’s first day of school looked.