Out of the three major assignments I chose to revise my Unit 2 annotated bibliography. After both rereading my essay and looking at the feedback provided on my bibliography, I plan to revise grammatical errors, missing punctuation, and sentences that can be both reworded and condensed. I’ve also found topic changes in the middle of paragraphs.

I plan to revise my essay by creating a checklist. I’ve highlighted sections of my essay where I found the issues I’ve stated. I have also listed them all in a separate google document and corrected each highlighted section. From here I will fix these sections indefinitely into my essay.