Looking over at the feedback on the assignments I would want to revise the U2 annotated bibliography final assignment. I want to revise this paper because it is the paper that I had gotten the lowest assignment on and after reading the feedback, I feel that I could do better with revisions. The steps that I will take to complete my revisions is to create smaller paragraphs rather than having one large paragraph itself. Also, I could have used more professional vocabulary and more detailed sentences.
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Professor: Jessica Penner
Email: jpenner@citytech.cuny.edu
Class Meetings & Times: Mondays & Wednesdays, 2-3:40 PM, in Namm 519
Office Hours: Tuesdays and Thursdays, 12 – 1 PM. I’ll be available through Zoom and will send an invitation via email that you should keep all semester. Try to join my meeting at the start of the hour, not at the end—since I may be talking to other students or have another appointment after the hour is up. If those times don’t work with your schedule, we can schedule a different time. This means you’ll have to schedule an appointment in advance via email. I suggest you have multiple times in mind, since your schedule may not mesh with mine!
Course Description: A course in effective essay writing and basic research techniques including use of the library. Demanding readings assigned for classroom discussion and as a basis for essay writing.
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