This website was a great refresher course on the game as well as a surprising history lesson on the beginnings of the sport! Well done! Your essay was also enlightening, because it helped me see the website in a different way–through the eyes of the creator–and explained how you came to the design as well as the subject matter. Again, great job!
You pointed out some things I’d change if I were going to revise the website already (in the essay), but I’d also delve more into the quotes you used, by telling us the context and the response to all the things people said.
This website was a great refresher course on the game as well as a surprising history lesson on the beginnings of the sport! Well done! Your essay was also enlightening, because it helped me see the website in a different way–through the eyes of the creator–and explained how you came to the design as well as the subject matter. Again, great job!
You pointed out some things I’d change if I were going to revise the website already (in the essay), but I’d also delve more into the quotes you used, by telling us the context and the response to all the things people said.
100 points (out of 100)!