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I enjoyed reading the draft, but there was some things that needed adjustments. The grammar for some of the sentences relating to the Brook articles has to be rewritten for a better explanation. Plus, the title of the articles has to be mention into the passage. Another problem is that I couldn’t find any of the articles from Part 2(articles you have to research) or any relation with the articles with the Brook articles.
Furthermore, other than the things I mentioned everything else is great, I agree with what you was saying about human emotions. You don’t have to do major changes with the sentences just rearrange and swap some words.