After reading Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I realized that my Ed narrative needs to have more details. I need to elaborate on my stories, I need to set the scene, make the reader have a better …
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Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative-Miah Segura
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on FD 1, I plan to work on making a better connection to the Adichie Tedtalk. I plan to work on sentence fragments by going back and editing my sentences. I want to move …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative — Your Name
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop two more scenes at key points in my story, in P. 4 and P. 6. Also, I plan to break up large blocks of dialogue by …
