After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on FD 1, I plan to work on making a better connection to the Adichie Tedtalk. I plan to work on sentence fragments by going back and editing my sentences. I want to move around certain sentences to focus on my feelings and explain the setting. Also, I plan to add more CSD because there’s parts throughout my writing that need to be explained more. I’ll meet with a tutor at the Writing Center to study complex and compound sentences.Â
