After reading Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I realized that my Ed narrative needs to have more details. I need to elaborate on my stories, I need to set the scene, make the reader have a better image of what is happening. I need to express my emotions better, make the scenes more dramatic. My ending needs to be meaningful and reflective. I plan on working with a tutor next week to help improve my Ed narrative by incorporating Professor Wu’s suggestions.
