What I plan to do for the educative narrative draft is to rewrite the whole thing but try to develop more scenes and get my essay’s main idea clear. I know that in my draft it wasn’t clear but this time I will try my best to make it as clear as possible, I will also try to add more dialogue and some descriptions. I will try to evade any repetition of those small sentences. I plan to go to the writing center to help me with my grammar and use phrases such as but,yet,and,so properly. I will use the examples Professor Wu posted and look at the past articles that show the use of dialogue, scenes, imagery, and more. Â
