Hi all,
Hope you are well. Thank you to everyone who submitted their group’s work and/or their notes today. Some general feedback:
- I’m a bit concerned by how few people have completed observation notes on their group’s space. The assignment directions read: “1 page minimum of notes you’ve taken as you explored the space, either
virtually or physically.” We discussed these notes last week and I provided a detailed handout elaborating on what to look for in your observations. They should record your own responses to features of the space, whether you’re observing it via video or playing a game. As always, when you are confused about the requirements for a given assignment, please contact me directly. - Please include “in-slide” citations that can be cross-referenced with the works cited page. The procedure is the same as that of an essay: next to a direct quote or paraphrase, please include the author’s name in brackets, and, where relevant, page numbers.
- The script of what you want to say should go in the speaker box, not on the slide itself. Exploit the visual nature of the slide – it’s fine to include text there, but don’t overwhelm the viewer.
- I’ve included more specific comments in each slide presentation, so please check there for further details.
Looking forward to seeing your presentations on Thursday!
best,
Professor Kwong
