I went back and I edited my film again because I felt the story in the first rough draft did not make a lot of sense and it wasn’t showing the story I wanted to show. After I reedited my film the story now seems a lot more linear and It’s promoting the story that I wanted to tell. Now I just need to work on cutting the length down just a little because it still passes a total run time of over 11 min. I also need to add some effects so the  transitions look better and I need to fix some of the audio. I also need to add some music to finalize my film.