Pick a model and organize your ideas

The Discourse community I belong to– TWITCH

Problem/issue in twitch 

A problem could be random people hating on streamers, and just having negative thoughts, when they’re a good person and just playing games, a podcast, or anything.

Possible audiences telling this problem too

-Twitch officials itself. With this already been happening, twitch has put it on their community guidelines called “hateful conduct and harassment”

 – people who stream alot and are more known for streaming on twitch.

 – the viewers 

I’m going to write a letter

The model I’m going to choose is a letter because I feel like writing a letter would specifically reach the audience I’m talking to. This will help me make my argument because writing a letter to the officials of twitch can show them what is going on in their community, especially from someone who sees this happen.

Planning

dear blah blah blah,

p1

-Saying hello introducing myself, say how long you’ve been a twitch member. How watching your favorite streamers gives you a sort or “break” of reality. Mine is playing games. Watching funny people play. How your a big supporter(how long you’ve been supporting)

-Then talk about how you’ve been seeing only awful things to your favorite streamer but other ones that i really enjoy watching as well. 

p2

-Putting that its affecting not only the streamers but the viewers as well

-this can cause streamers to stream anymore because of constant hate

-give an example, of a person experiencing and not wanting stream anymore cause of hate

       – this could make a chain reaction with other streamers in the twitch community 

       – explain how  

P3

-conclusion to your argument 

           -how this can be fixed

– “thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my letter” (something like that)

Sincerely,

                  (my name)