Dear professor Garcia,

I discovered that I am a very organized person when it comes to preparing out my essays. As a writer, I’ve seen that because I become easily distracted, it takes me a while to get into the flow of writing and maintain it. My mother was one of the types of resources I used during the writing process. I chose her as a resource because I had no prior knowledge of the process, at least in regards to her portion of it.I believe I should have received a grade between 70 and 80 because I know I could have done a better job of organizing my paragraphs and providing more information about how I became a citizen. Adding extra information to my essay without having the readers overwhelmed or becoming too much is something I want to continue working on. Another thing I want to concentrate on is avoiding distractions and maintaining my writing flow.

Sincerely,

Angely Gomez

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