Dear professor Garcia,

 Throughout the process of writing my education narrative, I was able to actually see how my topic had changed me. I was able to see how my mindset has changed and how that has improved who I was, my morals, and what ultimately makes me, me. During this writing process I did a lot of peer-review. I read bits and pieces to my sisters and my friends, trying to get their opinions and feedback. This was able to help me a lot because it gave me different points of view and that allowed me to see how my own writing is to other people. I think that my project has earned me a 90 and up because I was able to develop a clear point and was able to give personal experience and take articles that I’ve read in class to further develop my point. I would like to further work on being able to explain myself on a deeper level. I feel like I struggle with explaining my thoughts and I always keep things on the surface. While I was getting feedback from people, that was one thing that came up often. Explain this, explain that, so i think to improve my writing it’s something worth working on. 

Sincerely, Adrianna Carrion

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