Writing this narrative was really tough because I had to dig deep within my emotion and be very intimate with the reader to get them to feel exactly how I felt with what happened to me. They could understand the difficulty. And I knew that it would work by the way I wrote it. We have all been in this type of situation where we have failed at something and that truly is a sad moment in our lives. I knew I would have to do the narrative again because I feel like all of us, when we write, we take the bad “shitty” ideas out first and think we have hit gold. However, to get to the gold, we have to dig the “shit” out first. That’s why we have multiple drafts. I just decided to be very specific with every detail that happens so the reader could get a better approach to the story. That was my approach. 

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