The first time, I read shitty first drift. I didn’t realize it could affect my writing process. I think it is easy to just write a joyful story on the first try without any effort. But, once I finished my first drift and revised my story, it missed a lot of points to be a real one. At that moment, I saw the significance of writing more than one draft. In the second one, I began to arrange my ideas and add more dialogues to the story. I admit it is challenging to write a story that attracts readers nd give them the inspiration too. However, I revised and proofread it more than three times. Still every time I reread it, l recognize that I need to add or change some dialogues or paragraphs.

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