I need to work on writing several drafts, I do tend to get lazy and almost never re read my work as I should. I think doing several drafts would shape my writing and transform it into the best version it could be. It would allow me to proof read and add in details as I should be doing. When I write I do tend to think that I can’t do better and my work is as good as it is. But the times where I do re read my first writings, it sounds awful! I know that writing multiple drafts is a good idea and that it would bring out the best version of my writings.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HZa6QgnvBvgWHuJUqu5qi7v_JeEwcYUo92P8Tj5WBwM/edit?usp=sharing
Jessica, You need to change the settings on the google doc because I can not add comments. Since that is the case, I will say that in terms of what you have there, two things strike me as possible for your narrative: You could certainly tell of having a mental health day and how this changed your approach. But to do this, you would need a specific experience you would tell about–perhaps a particular mental health day. Your first, or when the concept was introduced. Alternatively, you take about your dealings with your religion and if you have a particular experience that lead you to see things differently, then you could use that as a topic as well.
Thank you, I fixed the document for you to comment!