As a learner, I’ve learned how to be a writer and thought from writer’s point of view. Those articles have helped me see how writers think in the process. It helped me decrease the anxiety to started writing a first draft. Also, when I read classmate’s writing, allowed us to exchange our ideas and saw more diverse aspects of storytelling and the techniques she chose.

Brainstorming, I wrote down everything I could think of.  At beginning, I spent a few minutes every day. Tried to create some topics that I want to write. Started by writing in a short note, then grouped them in different paragraphs and explained as much as I can. At the last day, I edited again.

I think I might receive B+ based on how the content is structured. How clearly the idea is expressed and also the ability to analyze.

I would like to review, refine, and improve my work to ensure it is clear, coherent, and effective.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F7y3qaTw6PJru7HL9lEtidc8w4SrrFBsVM7xIsLJM8k/edit?usp=sharing

Revised

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xPSHndgpXgGeIjBTXSIorttFDHnJ5DYf2NtLauOIJ0k/edit?usp=sharing