Reflecting back on this narrative has made me learn about many qualities of myself in which I had not known. It has shown me as a writer I have many aspects that I must improve on such as my vocabulary and paragraph structuring. There are many times throughout the writing which I had to take a pause and think ahead on which event/ detail I should mention. This has led me to use a grammar/ paraphrasing tool in order to push me into the right direction on how to structure the narrative. Even after all of those difficulties, if I were to put a grade on my work I believe that I have earned a B+. If I were to make any revisions, I would work on my conclusion paragraph and have added for details as well as restructured the paragraph in order for it to convey the message.

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