Choose which assignment you plan to revise. Then, look over the feedback on this assignment and write a paragraph answering the following questions:
- What will you revise? Why?
- How will you revise your piece? In other words, what steps will you take to complete your revision?
I will be revising my unit 2 annotated bibliography, due to the fact that i didn’t feel that i did i good job on it and didn’t write as much as i needed. I know what to do to revise my work as i been working on it already, I even added an additional citation to the bibliography because i felt that one of my citations didn’t really answer the question at hand so i decided to replace it. i also was fixing my grammar as well.
I am going to revise my Unit 2 annotated bibliography because i felt like i didn’t put enough time into it and didn’t write enough and also i chose a citation that didn’t answer the question at hand. I know what i have to do to revise the bibliography and that’s too replace the citation which is what i did already. i also fixed some of the grammar as well, and elaborated more to get to the answer to the question
I might want to rewrite Unit 1 because its the lowest scoring grade I have so far. I also feel like I could be more clear about certain things by adding more details and getting rid of details that was really relative to the essay. For revising fix grammatical errors because I did not get to proofread the piece due to it being submitted late and I wanted to get it submitted as fast as possible.