All the images are very well done for the clay model.
Pattern Unit and your Pattern Repetition is brilliantly done.
I feel like your original image of your dress was lost and we never got to see what actually looked like.
The Durer’s letter F was a little fat, tin it out a little.
The idea of the dark theme is brilliant and different.
I really like what you did on chapter 1. Your models look amazing and the black background adds a nice touch to it. On page 10, I notice some line weights are different. “rendered clay” is highlighted in bold and “model” is normal font. Try to make them even. Chapter 2, I can barely see the image on the clay model scan. Try to go on illustrator and make the lines darker. Overall, I like your book. There’s barely any big mistakes that prevent you from have a good score on the final.
All the images are very well done for the clay model.
Pattern Unit and your Pattern Repetition is brilliantly done.
I feel like your original image of your dress was lost and we never got to see what actually looked like.
The Durer’s letter F was a little fat, tin it out a little.
The idea of the dark theme is brilliant and different.
I really like what you did on chapter 1. Your models look amazing and the black background adds a nice touch to it. On page 10, I notice some line weights are different. “rendered clay” is highlighted in bold and “model” is normal font. Try to make them even. Chapter 2, I can barely see the image on the clay model scan. Try to go on illustrator and make the lines darker. Overall, I like your book. There’s barely any big mistakes that prevent you from have a good score on the final.