Your book is really good, I love the way you separate your chapters. I don’t understand the image on page 2, It should be bigger or surrounded by other pictures. You need chapter titles. You should make a black background on the clay model pages. Clean up your orthographic picture. Make Durer’s a separate chapter. Otherwise everything is great.
I like your clay models but some of your pictures need more background colors. Also some of your pictures don’t have titles such as pg 15.
In addition, your cover page is simple but always catches my eyes. Last, your pictures aren’t render at high quality.
Your book is really good, I love the way you separate your chapters. I don’t understand the image on page 2, It should be bigger or surrounded by other pictures. You need chapter titles. You should make a black background on the clay model pages. Clean up your orthographic picture. Make Durer’s a separate chapter. Otherwise everything is great.