In the last 6 months , I spent my time doing my first portfolio.
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As a whole I thought your book was really good but a few images look stretched and distorted. Also the drawings you scanned could look cleaner.
1. The resolution on pg.7 and 31 should be fixed or re scan the picture.
2. I like how the book is an outline of the process.But the chapter separations aren’t in the same order.
3. I Like how the pictures in chapter 1 float in the dark background.
Your cover photo is really good and it brings life to your book. You need to add titles to your chapters and have more separation. Photoshop the “unrolled cube” picture to make it clearer and more neat. The cube should have a black background that doesn’t show the material behind it.