Essay 2 draft
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
Hello jesse
Good job on having the substance in the essay congrats on 6 pager. You did a good job being able to cite a quote from you the excerpt. Most people were omitting that including me. This is very impressive stuff from you. you were able to distinguish your side from what was being said by the author. I also noticed no grammatical error and that is wonderful. good job keep it up.
Hi Jesse,
I thought this was a very compelling essay. I see that you quoted in MLA style and also have a works cited page. I like how you were able to compare yourself to the story and then find articles as support.