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UNIT #3

Global doesn’t need us, we need Global

In unit #2, I wrote an Annointed Bibliography about Global warming “Global doesn’t need us, we need Global.” I picked this topic because this is one of the most important things but no one is talking about it and don’t serious about our future generation. After 50 or 70 years maybe there will be no human, animals, trees alive. We just thinking about ourselves right now. We are using lots of plastic bags, cutting trees, making lots of factories for business, using cars all those are increasing carbon dioxide. Greta Thunberg impressed me a lot. Last year I saw her videos and those videos inspired me. Greta Thunberg skipped her school and then she sat down on the street to protect. We can’t go back but we can change our lifestyle. We can’t be selfish, we have to be make a change in our own self for our future. I feel like lots of things happening in our environment that are harmful but we are not taking care of our environment. Because of global warming, there are lots of other things are happening such as deforestation, greenhouse gas, air pollution, etc. All of those problems related to global warming. All I know is we should get serious and we should start taking little steps for saving our environment. This world is our home. If we destroy this our home then where will we stay in the future? So, that’s why we should do something like stop using plastic, plant more trees, etc. I think our government should be more careful about global warming. The amount of Carbon dioxide in our environment is a lot. Because of pollution, people are getting sick, the weather is changing a lot, etc. In the future, pollution will create more problems and that will affect our health and life. The production of chemicals in the environment that are harmful to the health of humans and animals, or that do damage to the planet or materials, is air pollution. Water is getting dirty too because of factories. They throw lots of plastic things into oceans and then fish and other animals try to eat that plastic because they don’t the difference. And plastic doesn’t get mix with anything. After years and years, researchers found that plastic doesn’t recycle. On the other hand, some of them tried to burn plastic but they saw it makes air pollution a lot and that’s not good for our environment. I think we should stop using plastic bottles and we should use glasses bottles. Then we should stop using plastic bags on market. On the other hand, we can use cotton bags. It could be more helpful for our environment. 

                   

The Maker’s Eye: Revising Your Own Manuscripts Donald M. Murray -DJE

 

“When students complete the first draft, they consider the job of writing done – and their teachers too often agree. When

professional writers complete the first draft, they usually feel that they are at the start of the writing process. When a draft is completed, the job of writing can begin. “

That is true that students their first draft they believe as a complete work but for people who professionally write it is just a first draft they believed  They just start writing and they make to write more to progress more and also that’s the difference between students and professional writers. When a student writes something They don’t have to focus is the thing that they’re writing is it’s going to be really important to their lives and when professional people are writing their job is writing they need to make sure the thing that is writing is to present them so they have to be perfect so they have to do more than one trash to make the writing more perfect. The conclusion it makes sense why the student believes their first draft is their perfect work and for professional Riders is just their beginning.  
Such detachment is not easy. Science-fiction writer Ray Bradbury supposedly puts each manuscript away for a year to the day and then rereads it as a 

stranger. Not many writers have the discipline or the time to do this. We must read when our judgment may be at its worst when we are close to the euphoric moment of creation.

Very hooked to this paragraph I like the idea when want to be a professional writer they should be their own writing enemy because they have to understand that  When their work is going to be published not just one or two people going to read it a lot of people going to read it and they have to meet with people that may not like their writing style Or don’t like the opinion that they have shown in their writing.  as a student, you don’t really have to care about this stuff but as a professional writer you have to go to your  writing over and over again to make sure your work may not offend someone   
Writers often read aloud at this stage of the editing process, muttering or whispering to themselves, calling on the ear’s experience with the language. Does this sound right – or that? Writers edit, shifting back and forth from eye to page to ear to page……..   I truly believe in this fact when you read aloud your writing you can see what mistake you made in your writing or what needs to be fixed or what doesn’t really make sense or what you should add to your writing you could see it clearly. 
A piece of writing is never finished.  this is a whole new point of view for me I always think when I’m done writing is that writing is just done but based on the author is say that a writer is never finished There’s always a way to make writing  Perfect. It’s just you have a time that you meet any believe it is okay to give up or finish up your writing this is an amazing fact to think about 
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