Lynch and Edensor had similarities and differences. One major similarity these two have is that the emphasize the theme of identity. Both edensor and Lynch also mention structure, which is the relationship between the object and the observer .
The biggest difference I noticed in the two articles was lynches idea of building the image. Building the image is when the space is altered and affected, where as edensor mentions how there was an unplanned bricolage of structures and designs that provided for a contrasting aesthetic context, unlike Lynch is denser was stressing the beauty of untouched land and basically natural city geography. The overall theme I got from Lynch was focusing on the observer in the observed. Whereas Edensor focuses mainly on the art of tourism and how it’s a performance
LIB 2205ID-D958 Learning Places: Understanding the City-Interdisciplinary
Professors Chin and Swift- Fall 2016
Ryan,
You have written a very brief summary of the main points of the articles but some of the most important concepts are not here. The middle of your second paragraph is very unclear. You should proofread your work before submitting to make sure your reader can make sense of your ideas. I think you’re onto something in terms of structure, but it’s hard to tell if you have completely thought through the idea.