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  1. Christopher Swift

    Good job identifying the concepts of identity and structured space in both essays. In your writing in general, try to avoid using pronouns (you wrote the word “they” quite a bit). If a pronoun doesn’t have a precedent then it’s very difficult to know who “they” are! Better to simply write the noun (“tourists”, if that’s who you mean by “they”).


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