LIB 2205ID-D958 Learning Places: Understanding the City-Interdisciplinary
Professors Chin and Swift- Fall 2016
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Good job identifying the concepts of identity and structured space in both essays. In your writing in general, try to avoid using pronouns (you wrote the word “they” quite a bit). If a pronoun doesn’t have a precedent then it’s very difficult to know who “they” are! Better to simply write the noun (“tourists”, if that’s who you mean by “they”).