I am proud of myself, I didnt do the best but now i have a better understand on were i was going wrong at. I have a better understanding of how to write an essay. I did a pretty good job when it comes down to the basics of completing an essay. What I was missing was examples and more explanatio. Unfortunately I am definitely one of those who thinks of more ideas to contribute after the fact. I must put examples   and explain what I’m trying to write in more detail so that my readers can understand what I’m writing.