I read the feedback that was given to me by Professor Blain I agreed with what she said. She pointed out all my grammatical mistakes (which I had a lot of). I’ve always had a lot of mistakes in my essays since I type fast and I don’t always see my mistakes in my essay while I’m going, So unless I see the red line that signifies a mistake I most likely won’t see the mistake. Another piece of feedback that I was given was to have a better ending to my essay and to my story and that is what i have to work on in my revision.