Excellent work. You included much detail that gives the reader a very clear image of the park and its uses. There were a couple of times that you made conclusions without checking the accuracy of a little guesswork. See my comments embedded in the document posted in the FILES section of OpenLab.
Excellent work. You included much detail that gives the reader a very clear image of the park and its uses. There were a couple of times that you made conclusions without checking the accuracy of a little guesswork. See my comments embedded in the document posted in the FILES section of OpenLab.