Vivian,Yuan
13-05 34th Ave
Long island, NY,11106
3476561665
vivianyuan1995@msn.cn
To: JobStand.net
I recently came across your advertisement for a graphic designer, and would like to submit my resume and application for the advertised post. After perusing your requirements I feel that my qualifications and work experience perfectly match them. I am major in Graphic Designing and I Experience with general graphic design, commercial art, visual art, and advertising.
Also I have skills with Creativity, communication, and problem-solving,Self-discipline to budget time, and to meet deadlines and production schedules,Ability to work well in a team or independently and under pressure,Attention to detail. Ability to choose the right fonts, colors to create balanced composition,Ability to learn quickly and adapt to new technology,Open to new ideas and influences, and quick to react to changing trends,Ability to effectively present ideas—both verbally and visually.
I am available for interview at your convenience and look forward to hearing from you soon.
This cover letter is a job posting for: Web Developer
Dear Vivian,
Your cover letter is very strong and impressive. You’ve used some technical terminology but no example of a time where you executed projects demonstrating your capabilities . There are also some grammar mistakes that i’ve corrected for you.
Vivian,Yuan
13-05 34th Ave
Long island, NY,11106
3476561665
vivianyuan1995@msn.cn
To: JobStand.net
I’ve recently come across your advertisement for a graphic designer, and would like to submit my resume and application for the advertised post. After perusing your requirements I feel that my qualifications and work experience match up perfectly. I major in Graphic Design and have had experiences with general graphic design, commercial art, visual art, and advertising.
I have creative skills , communicative abilties, and problem-solving skills. Self-discipline to budget time, and to meet deadlines and production schedules. Ability to work well in a team or independently and under pressure. Attention to detail. Ability to choose the right fonts, colors to create balanced composition. Ability to learn quickly and adapt to new technology. Open to new ideas and influences, and quick to react to changing trends. Ability to effectively present ideas—both verbally and visually.
I am available for interview at your convenience and look forward to hearing from you soon
Dear Vivian, Yuan,
After I read your cover letter, I believe you are well qualified and prepared for the Graphic Designer position. In my opinion, I think that Vivian’s skills and experience make her the Right candidate for this particular position. By reading this letter I was able to tell what the job ad is about. And yes this letter does meets with some of the employer’s needs. I do not think that the author has missed understanding the employer’s needs. This letter makes Vivian look like a Great applicant for this position. Everything in this letter is well organized, and most importantly skills with Creativity, communication, and problem-solving, Self-discipline to budget time, and to meet deadlines and production schedules, Ability to work well in a team or independently and under pressure, Attention to detail. Ability to choose the right fonts, colors to create balanced composition, Ability to learn quickly and adapt to new technology, Open to new ideas and influences, and quick to react to changing trends, Ability to effectively present. Anyone looking at Vivian’s letter would definitely hire her because it exactly states all the requirements to meet the employer’s needs. And there is no grammar neither mechanical errors. She definitely has a great amount of experience and skills to Qualified for the Graphic Designer position.