Luis Campoverde
32-42 105st
East Elmhurst,NY 11369
347-536-1200
March 3.2015
Dear SRC:
Are you looking for a Electrical Engineer who:
- Just graduated and is eager to learn and dedicated.
- Excellent written and oral communication skills.
- Put everything he learned to use with your company.
- Work every day to get better.
If so, then you need look no further. You will see from my enclosed resume that I meet all of these qualifications and more.
I don’t have any prior experience on the field but have done projects with matlab and psplice. I have done many projects with professors in college and have very good grades on them. I am very dedicated to what I do and would really appreciate to form part of your team.
I would very much like to discuss opportunities with SRC.To schedule an interview, please call me at 347-536-1200.The best time to reach me is between 8am and 9pmbut you can leave me a voice message and I will get back to you.
Thank you for taking the time to review my resume. I look forward to talking with you.
Sincerely,
Luis Campoverde
Luis’s letter states quite clearly that he is looking for a position as Electrical Engineer which requires little or no experience.
Luis’s letter is on target with replying to this position. The position is an entry level one which does not require much experience.
Luis also reveals immediately that although he does not have any real employment experience, he has other qualities which will be an asset to the company.
The letter makes Luis seem like a good candidate.
Luis has stated his position very clearly. He is looking for an entry level position; he does not have any real experience but he does have other qualities which he can offer the company.
The letter portrays Luis as a very energetic applicant, who is very passionate about this field. My only issue is the questions at the beginning of the letter. Should there be question marks at the end?