This picture I did not take of an evening sky. As the sun slowly went down the skies colors changed with colors ranging from baby pink to orange and lavender clouds. The clouds spread across the horizon formed in the shape of deep waves. This sunset was a great way to reflect back on a successful day I had.
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Some really nice detail and imagery here. I might leave out the last sentence, since the aim in these unphotgraphable moments is to present a detailed verbal portrait of the action happening at a single moment of time; adding commentary to it is not needed. Try to make your description more of a start portrait of what you see.